Kia ora, my name is Mark and I am working at Rāwhiti School today. This is amazing because you have added heaps of detail especially how many acorns you picked up. Did you know in the holidays I went to Timaru and went swimming at CBay. Next time you could fill all four squares with a picture. Why did you cry at Wonder Park? Goodbye, Mark
Kia ora, my name is Teri j. This is amazing because I like how you told us your holidays. Did you know in the holidays I Went to my Greenies. Next time you could Fill in all four boxes. Why did you Pick up acorns. Bye Bye. Teri j
Kia ora, my name is Noah im a student at Rawhiti School. I liked the way you said how many acorns you picked up. Did you know in the holidays I went to the Gold Coast in Australia. I went to movie word.
. Maybe you could..use all the 4 squares. Why did you cry at the movies.
Kia ora, my name is Lachie. This is amazing because you showed heaps of cool details. Did you know in the holidays I went to QE11. Next time you could maybe you could make it bigger Why did you do heaps of writing?
Kia ora, my name is Lexie and I am a student at rawhiti school. This is amazing because your picture showed that it was at night. Did you know in the holidays I had a sleepover at my friends house. Next time you could say what day it was. Why did you have some stops.
Kia ora, my name is my name is benji. This is amazing because you showed details Did you know in the holidays I went to flip owt. Next time you could make your words bigger. Why did you do so much writing
Kia ora, my name is Jazmin and I am a student from Rawhiti School. This is a nice report because your drawing was amazing. Did you know I have a cat she is a black and white cat her name is Nachos she is very old. Next time you could tell more of your holidays or did you only have one day of the holidays? Why did you only write about that story well because it makes me think that was your Favorite story?
Kia ora, my name is Angus l am a student at Rawhiti School This is amazing because you write your story so clearly Did you know in the holidays I went snow tubing Next time you could tell us what movie you watched Why did you not fill in the last square ?
Kia ora, my name is Everley and I am a student at Rawhiti School and I am with Mark today.
This is amazing because you have picked up so many acorns!!! Did you know in the holidays I went to Akaroa and we went to the beach and had a ice cream!It was so so so good.Then we went home and made a hut. Next time you could maybe fill all of the squares instead of leaving one out. Why did you chose that particular thing you did in the holidays?
Kia ora, my name is Aaliyah and i am a student at rawhiti school This is amazing because you added a lot of information Did you know in the holidays I had a sleepover with my friend at my house Next time you could make sure it makes more sense Why did you did you have some stops on the way
Kia ora, my name is Lily Im a Student from Rawhiti School This is amazing because your cat survived . This reminded me of when my cat got hit by a car. Next time you could keep the cat Inside. Why were you still sad when you heard it survived.
Kia ora, my name is Zara and my school is Rawhiti school. This is amazing because there is 2 stories. Did you know in the holidays my Nana came down from Auckland. Next time you could make the writing bigger. Why did you not fill in one of the squares?
Kia ora, my name is Travis And I am a student at rawhiti school This is amazing because You said when it was, Easter! Did you know in the holidays I Went to the lego movie 2 with my friend Sonny Next time you could fill in all the squares with drawings. Why did you get a new puppy?
Kia ora, my name is Anika. I am a student at Rawhiti School. This is amazing because of your amazing work! Did you know in the holidays I went to Auckland to see my Grandparents. Next time you could leave space for the writing and fill the hole slid with the pitcher. why did you think of doing a Holiday slide.
Kia ora, my name is charlie and i am a student at rawhiti school. This is amazing because you put lots of effort in to it. Did you know in the holidays I went to aussi was lost of fun. Next time you could put more photos in it. Why did you cry in the move….
Kia ora, my name is Isla iam student at Rawhiti. This is amazing because you put a lot of information in your slide . This reminded me of my trampoline. Next time you could put more detail in your picture. Why did you go on the trampoline.
Kia ora, my name is Addison and i learn at Rawhiti School This is amazing because you did heaps of writing Did you know in the holidays I went to Twizel Next time you could fill all the boxes. What is Freddy like? Goodbye, Addison
Kia ora, my name is Mason. This is amazing because it has heaps of words. Did you know in the Holidays I we to Australia. Next time you could do all of the pictures. Why did you just play Roblox instead of any other game? Goodbye from Mason.
Kia ora, my name is Maia and my school is Rawhiti school This is amazing because you filled in all the boxes. Did you know in the holidays I was looking at houses for my dad At my mums house we are going to move house in 3 weeks. Next time you could do more writing Why did you write that your dog died. It really would be sad. I feel sorry for you. My dog got put down and my rabbit died. Goodbye Maia
Kia ora, my name is Declan. This is amazing because you did full stops and capital letters. Did you know in the holidays I looked after the school Guinea pigs. Next time you could do the picture of Wonderpark. Why did you only play Roblox? Good bye from Declan
Kia ora, my name is Pax I go to Rawhiti School. I liked the way you did a lot of detail on the computer. Did you know in the holidays I went to Australia and I stayed in a Mansion. Next time you could make the eyes not smudged everywhere. Why did you cry at wonder park?
Kia ora, my name is Luka This is amazing because i like the car Did you know in the holidays I went to QE11 Next time you could Make the pictures smaller Why did you Make the pictures big?
Kia ora, my name is Hunter This is amazing because it is a Lamborghini. Did you know in the holidays I stayed Home. Next time you could put words in. Why did you make the picture big?
Hi my name is Cole. I am a student at rawhiti school
I liked the way you played nicely with your friend. Did you know in the holidays I went to my Prize-giving. Next time you could play a different game. Why did you have a sleepover.
Kia ora, my name is Connor. This is amazing because I like roblox too. Did you know in the holidays I went to my friend Noah's house and we had a sleepover. Next time you could draw in the other square. Where did you go and find the acorns?
Wow Rm 14 and 15 writers - I really enjoyed reading what you got up toin the holidays.Your pictures look great too...tino pai rawa atu!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora, my name is Mark and I am working at Rāwhiti School today.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you have added heaps of detail especially how many acorns you picked up.
Did you know in the holidays I went to Timaru and went swimming at CBay.
Next time you could fill all four squares with a picture.
Why did you cry at Wonder Park?
Goodbye, Mark
Kia ora, my name is Teri j.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because I like how you told us your holidays.
Did you know in the holidays I Went to my Greenies.
Next time you could Fill in all four boxes.
Why did you Pick up acorns.
Bye Bye. Teri j
Kia ora, my name is Noah im a student at Rawhiti School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said how many acorns you picked up.
Did you know in the holidays I went to the Gold Coast in Australia. I went to movie word.
. Maybe you could..use all the 4 squares.
Why did you cry at the movies.
Kia ora, my name is Lachie.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you showed heaps of cool details.
Did you know in the holidays I went to QE11.
Next time you could maybe you could make it bigger
Why did you do heaps of writing?
Kia ora, my name is Lexie and I am a student at rawhiti school.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because your picture showed that it was at night.
Did you know in the holidays I had a sleepover at my friends house.
Next time you could say what day it was.
Why did you have some stops.
Kia ora, my name is my name is benji.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you showed details
Did you know in the holidays I went to flip owt.
Next time you could make your words bigger.
Why did you do so much writing
Kia ora, my name is Jazmin and I am a student from Rawhiti School.
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice report because your drawing was amazing.
Did you know I have a cat she is a black and white cat her name is Nachos she is very old.
Next time you could tell more of your holidays or did you only have one day of the holidays?
Why did you only write about that story well because it makes me think that was your
Favorite story?
Kia ora, my name is Angus l am a student at Rawhiti School
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you write your story so clearly
Did you know in the holidays I went snow tubing
Next time you could tell us what movie you watched
Why did you not fill in the last square ?
Kia ora, my name is Everley and I am a student at Rawhiti School and I am with Mark today.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you have picked up so many acorns!!!
Did you know in the holidays I went to Akaroa and we went to the beach and had a ice cream!It was so so so good.Then we went home and made a hut.
Next time you could maybe fill all of the squares instead of leaving one out.
Why did you chose that particular thing you did in the holidays?
Kia ora, my name is Aaliyah and i am a student at rawhiti school
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you added a lot of information
Did you know in the holidays I had a sleepover with my friend at my house
Next time you could make sure it makes more sense
Why did you did you have some stops on the way
Kia ora, my name is Lily Im a Student from Rawhiti School
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because your cat survived .
This reminded me of when my cat got hit by a car.
Next time you could keep the cat Inside.
Why were you still sad when you heard it survived.
Kia ora, my name is emma and i am at Rawhiti school .
ReplyDeleteI loved this because i like roblox too.
I love your picture.
Why did you play roblox?
Kia ora, my name is Zara and my school is Rawhiti school.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because there is 2 stories.
Did you know in the holidays my Nana came down from Auckland.
Next time you could make the writing bigger.
Why did you not fill in one of the squares?
Kia ora, my name is Travis And I am a student at rawhiti school
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because You said when it was, Easter!
Did you know in the holidays I Went to the lego movie 2 with my friend Sonny
Next time you could fill in all the squares with drawings.
Why did you get a new puppy?
Goodbye Lily.
Travis
Kia ora, my name is Anika. I am a student at Rawhiti School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because of your amazing work!
Did you know in the holidays I went to Auckland to see my Grandparents.
Next time you could leave space for the writing and fill the hole slid with the pitcher.
why did you think of doing a Holiday slide.
Kia ora, my name is charlie and i am a student at rawhiti school.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you put lots of effort in to it.
Did you know in the holidays I went to aussi was lost of fun.
Next time you could put more photos in it.
Why did you cry in the move….
Kia ora, my name is Isla iam student at Rawhiti.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you put a lot of information in your slide .
This reminded me of my trampoline.
Next time you could put more detail in your picture.
Why did you go on the trampoline.
Kia ora, my name is Addison and i learn at Rawhiti School
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you did heaps of writing
Did you know in the holidays I went to Twizel
Next time you could fill all the boxes.
What is Freddy like?
Goodbye, Addison
Kia ora, my name is Mason.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because it has heaps of words.
Did you know in the Holidays I we to Australia.
Next time you could do all of the pictures.
Why did you just play Roblox instead of any other game?
Goodbye from Mason.
Kia ora, my name is Maia and my school is Rawhiti school
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you filled in all the boxes.
Did you know in the holidays I was looking at houses for my dad At my mums house we are going to move house in 3 weeks.
Next time you could do more writing
Why did you write that your dog died. It really would be sad. I feel sorry for you. My dog got put down and my rabbit died.
Goodbye Maia
Kia ora, my name is Declan.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you did full stops and capital letters.
Did you know in the holidays I looked after the school
Guinea pigs.
Next time you could do the picture of Wonderpark.
Why did you only play Roblox?
Good bye from Declan
Kia ora, my name is Pax I go to Rawhiti School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you did a lot of detail on the computer.
Did you know in the holidays I went to Australia and I stayed in a Mansion.
Next time you could make the eyes not smudged everywhere.
Why did you cry at wonder park?
Kia ora, my name is Luka
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because i like the car
Did you know in the holidays I went to QE11
Next time you could Make the pictures smaller
Why did you Make the pictures big?
Kia ora, my name is Hunter
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because it is a Lamborghini.
Did you know in the holidays I stayed Home.
Next time you could put words in.
Why did you make the picture big?
Hi my name is Cole. I am a student at rawhiti school
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you played nicely with your friend.
Did you know in the holidays I went to my Prize-giving.
Next time you could play a different game.
Why did you have a sleepover.
Kia ora, my name is Connor.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because I like roblox too.
Did you know in the holidays I went to my friend Noah's house and we had a sleepover.
Next time you could draw in the other square.
Where did you go and find the acorns?